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a hidden story (the nightmare)

emmeline

Long ago there was peace and haromy in the universe. In the begining a powerfull unown god/creature with: a body of a lion/deer, horns of a deer, manes of a lion -_-, wings of a angel (of course), tail of a wolf and a mighty roar. With his mind he created a world what he wanted but, the creature thought that he couldn't control his creation....out of his bad thoughts and nightmares came bad creature's and monsters out but, his most worst nightmare was that he could make the strongest, fearest and dangerous creature that has ever been made. On one time the god looked down to see his beautifull creation suddenly, the creature saw a vision. A demon looking black dragon with a golden mask and red glowing eyes was looking at him. The demon was so powerfull that it could make of her (yes it's a woman) emotions demons. Her emotion were out of fear, illusion, anger and hate. The god was a worried, terridfied of this vision and he suddenly felt a intense of pain in his body. The pain was getting worse and worse until, the god felt down and had the feeling that there was taken form him. Nothing, then the god in his shadow and he saw that he didn't had anymore a shadow. The god felt something strong, cold and horrofied behind him, he stand up and looked what there was behind him. He saw the creature of his most worried and horrofied nightmare. The creature looked at the god and smiled then, she took the form of a beautifull woman but the woman didn't looked like other women. No her body a black, her long hair also and had red glowing stripes (and eyes). Again the demon creature smiled and disapeared, the god wanted to stop her but he was too weak. But even his creation also. The demon went to a island and rested there in a volcano, her energy was growing a lot with nightmares and souls from peoples. But it didn't grew a lot. The creature's name was Nethilia.
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know: They say that when Nethilia finally awakes up that the volcano will blow up and that she will bring the nightmare of the unown god/creature will let come true.

a hidden story (the nightmare of a god-Nethilia's story)
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emmeline

I made this story, because I wanted to (It acually belongs to my picture "Fallen SinX"

but hey, do u guys like it :3 ?
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Zeio

That was an interesting story to me :) Even if your english is THAT mysteriously bad... xD Anyway i've got the feeling why you made Nethilia to look like so caught up in solitude. So she's born from the God's shadow, and the shadow of the God was formed by doubt and uncertainty. Good idea not calling God with his true name... Finding out the main char of your (first?) story is pretty less for a begining. But ofcourse if you don't want to get yourself in making a whole new story this wasn't a bad writing :/
I am looking forward for the sequel. Hope soon more of you will honor us with letting us know about your private strories.

P.S.: keep at hand a dictionary emmeline if you don't know how to write some of those words in english, sorry. You know i just giving advice, don't blame at me :)
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emmeline

Zeio wrote:
Even if your english is THAT mysteriously bad... xD


;_; meanie /sigh >_> i'm 12years old and I just stared with secondaire english, so sorry >> but ok I forgive u
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Invierno

Zeio

You just started seconadry english emmeline? O.o
I think you already on a higher level than that, its obvious with your capacity for learning languages. And about my previous post, you know that i wasn't serious :)
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emmeline

to Invierno: ty ^^
to Zeio: ok ^^
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