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Teovork



Right. So, i think it looks pretty good, im wondering if you guys could please give me some feedback, and tell me if there is anythig i could improve on it to make it look better.

Moving the emote closer to the sprite was already suggested, and i did move it. It's just not the version posted on here.

Thanks a lot guys.

Konochi

This is cool

Linny

its a realy cool sig but maybe a lil bit black in the name will be cooly ^^

Teovork



Darkened a bit to make it look closer to black.

Linny

thet looks beter olredy cooly^^
maybe try a lil satin *(in the outer side of the tekst)* ore iner glow *(black)*

Teovork

mm tried it but it doesnt really change it that much.

Linny

lolly if u saw thet 1e one and then the 2e the 2e is way bether ^^

Teovork

what do you mean?

Linny

if u look to youre 1e post threr u see outhe sig tougether, then u will see thet with the more black around the tekst it look mote 1 part then the 1 without the black glow^^

Teovork

ahh. kay thanks.

Ryukei

Can i have one JUST like yours?

It looks awesome to me. <3

If you could make one like this for me,
then could you change the Reaper picture to a dragon,
the 'Megadeth" changed to "Ryukei".
The italicized 'Dead and Back again" changed to "Enter the Dragon"
And the Sprite changed to Assassin Cross?

Would be really cool if you can do that.. <3

Teovork

Ryukei wrote:
Can i have one JUST like yours?

It looks awesome to me. <3

If you could make one like this for me,
then could you change the Reaper picture to a dragon,
the 'Megadeth" changed to "Ryukei".
The italicized 'Dead and Back again" changed to "Enter the Dragon"
And the Sprite changed to Assassin Cross?

Would be really cool if you can do that.. <3


to be perfectly honest, i retired from making signatures.

But, i'll come out of retirement to do one for you.

I just need to know what hair / hair color / head gear you would like on your sinx

Teovork

double post.. oops. >.<

Ryukei



Something like the helm on this sig. Just need everything jet black though.

Hairstyle is the first hairstle. The default one.

Hair color, black would be nice.

Also if you could, make the SinX hold blood-stained daggers by the side.

Thanks in advance.

for the headgear, i could find the valk helm or wings..

would you happen to know where i could find sprites of those?

and just to show you where i'm at in the signature process so faar,


I'll add headgear once i hear from you, and while i'm at it, do you have any other suggestions for it?

Teovork

wrote:
for the headgear, i couldn't find the valk helm or wings.


Fixed.

Not sure why it's not letting me post under my account right now.. i AM logged in..

Wouldnt let me edit either.. weird.. better now i guess :S

Ryukei

Here's one if you can't find any.


And the i am satisfied with the overall outcome of the signature.

But somehow, the Ryukei letterings seem out of place. Maybe it's the font and the size.

And i would really appreciate if you can make one with a Black colored SinX and this Brown colored SinX so i can make a comparison.

Some wings to consider:

For the Brown version.


For the Black version.

And IF POSSIBLE, make the SinX look like your Paladin with the fire around the sprite.

=3

Hope this helps in your design skills. (They are awesome btw.)

D.W.

I suggest you add in wraith or any grim-reaper-esqe monster to add more effect, put the paladin in a defenidn stance to make it more action, alot of people do that hold stand-still-look-good. If you wanna make it look good you should go all out on it.

Teovork

@Ryukei The fire looked.. bad. so instead i blurred it to make it look more like you were moving.. hope that's alright.
This is about as dark as i can get your sprite, and the reason i can't just use a black color from a game, is because the sprite i have made you is custom. The character had to be in the exact pose, and the site i use for sprite editing doesnt have colors.

sorry, i dont have a choice between brown and black, i accidentally over-wrote the origional with this. I could start over to show you the difference, but that would take time, and im really.. REALLY lazy.
I Also changed the text color and font, hopefully you like it better. Text is probabally my weakest feature in signatures, but i tried.
If you have any suggestions, dont hesitate to ask.

@D.W i prefer it with only the one grim reaper in it. i reolize i have plenty more room for other things, but it makes the signature look crowded if it's all in there. I'de show you, but i didn't bother saving my trial of this, as it looked bad. Also, the paladin IS in a defencive stance. He's in the exact stance i wanted him in. The waiting position that characters go to after taking a hit.
and by hold-still-look-good i assume you mean non animated. If i animated the paladin, i would have to animate the flames. Not going to happen.
And i don't need to go all out anymore, i quit Ragnarok, again, though i still am doing the occasional custom sprite, or signature.

Ryukei

I just realized this black version clashed a little with the back ground colors. And the helm i provided seemed to stand out for some reason.

I'll get some professional critics to give me comments about it in which i will forward them to you. Sounds good? And yeah, i will include the maker's name. Made by Teovark / Megadeth. Whichever looks better.

Teovork

Ryukei wrote:
I just realized this black version clashed a little with the back ground colors. And the helm i provided seemed to stand out for some reason.

I'll get some professional critics to give me comments about it in which i will forward them to you. Sounds good? And yeah, i will include the maker's name. Made by Teovark / Megadeth. Whichever looks better.


i think the helm has either been re-colored or dyed in game.. because otherwise it shouldnt stand out like that. If you could find me a sprite sheet with it normal, i could change that.

And sure. Sounds fine to me. For maker name put Teovork i guess..

I darkened the dragon a bit to try and balance it with the darker sin, and cut the height a little bit so it takes up less room.

To compare, i've put them beside eachother

Ryukei

I can already tell that it will be very choppy even without the white background. The wings a distorted when they stick out of the sig. The helm on the sin looks weird as the colours don't even match each other. The sin colour itself is saturated too much, and the helm is pushed to much forward from the head.


[x] the helm is out of place
[x] the sprite coloring is a bit too burnt, seems to me a bit too much overlaying effect.
[x] the wings fail, too pixelated.
[x] needs different variations of fonts, because he's separating your name and "enter the dragon" he needs a smooth flow of fonts. he needs to change the font for "enter the dragon" because your name is pretty much the main focal text, thus to balance out with that fancy font, he needs to use something else less scriptive.
[x] if your friend is going to have the font drop shadow like that , he should just leave it as a whole white bg, rather than cutting it off like that.


Those were the comments. Helpful?

D.W.

Just what are you trying to improve on this sig?

Teovork

@Ryukei : ouch. not one positive comment haha. Oh well, at least it's actual feedback. In the first comment, i'm not sure what he means by "it will be very choppy even without the white background".. Put back the old sinx, fixing oversaturation problem, removed wings, removed helm.
For the second set of comments, the helm provided was the helm used. If you find me a different valk helm, or tell me a different helm to use, that will be fixed. Sprite too "burnt", as per request, i made it darker. I have fixed it in this revision of the signature. Wings too pixelated, i used what was supplied to me.


@D.W. : nothing anymore. i'm fine with it, and working on ryu's.

D.W.

I dunno anything about signatures, so I asked.
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